Professional Screenplay Notes from a Produced Screenwriter

I like to keep things simple, so I provide three distinct services...

 

Script Notes - in-depth feedback on your completed screenplay - click here.

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The Strength Test - make sure your idea holds up BEFORE you start writing - click here.

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The First 10 Pages - make sure your screenplay opening packs a punch - click here.

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Script Notes 

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I'll help you see your screenplay the way a producer sees it.

 

I’ll tell you what works, what doesn't - and what to do about it.

 

My notes are ‘first read’ notes – feedback on your writing as I read it. This is because no one in the industry is going to read your script more than once. They’re going to react to what you’ve written, page by page. So I do exactly the same. 

 

I'll tell you the page, the line, and I'll tell you exactly what the problems are and what you can do about them. My notes are always what you need to hear - the same level of honest, detailed feedback I’d want to receive myself.

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I'll look at your formatting, your dialogue, your action, your characters, your story, your tone and style, and everything else along the way.

 

And because I don’t simply point out problems, I offer solutions too, all my notes are actionable. And don't worry, my intention is never to change your story to something different - I'm only interested in making it better.

 

So, what do you get, exactly?

 

10-15 pages of forensic notes is normal. Not filled with waffle or vague opinions, but more like an in-depth chat. You and me, two writers, discussing your screenplay.

 

And when they arrive in your inbox, I guarantee you won’t be left wondering what to do next. 

 

Instead you’ll be excited to start your next draft.

 

What’s it cost? £150 per full-length script. (max 110 pages)

(reduced from £249, for a limited time)​

 

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The Strength Test

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Send a minimum of three lines, and a maximum of a page, outlining your screenplay idea and get invaluable thoughts, ideas and suggestions for you to explore - before you start writing.

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What's it cost? £35 per idea.

(reduced from £50, for a limited time)

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The First 10 Pages

 

Most producers will only give you 10 pages to impress them. 

No matter how great the rest of your script, it won't matter, because if you haven't grabbed their attention in those ten pages, they'll never read it.

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The First 10 Pages is a deep dive into the beginning of your screenplay and your story. 

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I'll give you notes as detailed as my Script Notes service (see above), but for a fraction of the price.

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What's it cost? £35 (for your first 10 pages)

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When you're ready for notes I guarantee will improve your screenplay, drop me a message below.

And if you have any questions at all - please don't hesitate to ask.

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